It’s a horrible name, Coldplay. It doesn’t conjure up any positive thoughts.
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Cycling always receives a bad name. It's always cycling that's attacked and other sports are never attacked.
Cycling always receives a bad name. It’s always cycling that’s attacked and other sports are never attacked.
You've got to leave the reader with more than just a name and a costume – they need to know who the character is, what they're like, what kind of attitude they have, what sort of role they play.
You’ve got to leave the reader with more than just a name and a costume – they need to know who the character is, what they’re like, what kind of attitude they have, what sort of role they play.